*sigh* I've been looking and looking and looking for a beta, but nobody wants to beta for me. I wonder why:( Am I really that annoying that people don't wanna beta for me? Or maybe it's just that they have no interest in my fic? I dunno, but I'm starting to get a bit of a complex. I'm also wondering, if nobody wants to
beta for me for this fic, then are they gonna have any interest in actually reading it when it's up on HPFF? Jessi - who of course posted the Unconventional Pairings challenge - said that she can't wait to read it, but I know that she's too busy to beta it. besides, since I'm writing it for her challenge, she might want some element of surprise, kinda like when yur birthday or Xmas is coming and you don't wanna know what your presents are yet bc you don't wanna ruin the surprise.
I guess I'm on my own this time, which sucks bc although I'm perfectly capable of doing this alone, I'd prefer to have someone helping me out, and inspiring me, and helping me brainstorm. That always helps. So Shona, if you're reading this, please come back to SAYS when you get the chance!
That said, I'll start discussing my story now. I have a very rough and somewhat corny scene written out in which Ron is about to kiss Cho. This is very roguh and I'm not sure whether or not I'll actually use it...
"Cho, I'm about to kiss you," Ron said as his face slowly inched closer to hers. "If you really don't like me, just stop me and I'll take the hint."
Cho looked nervous as the Gryffindor came closer, like she was thinking about stopping him, but just stood there.
Ron was now close enough for her to feel his breath on her face as he smirked and murmured, "Last chance, Cho..." Her hands lifted a little, like she couldn't decide whether or not to stop him, but the redhead took her hands in his and gently held them as his lips softly, tenderly caressed hers.At this point, Neville and Hermione are walking by, talking and laughing, when they see Ron and Cho kiss. Hermione's smile slides right off her face at the sight of Ron kissing the Ravenclaw. Neville frowns and glances a few times from hermione, to the couple, then back, looking discouraged. Just when he thinks Hermione is falling for him, Ron intervenes.
And that's it for now. Thanks for letting me share this:)